Touching Base and Story Structure


It’s actually been like…two months since I posted something? Yeah, apparently life happens sometimes and when it does, it does it in a very rude and uncompromising way, and I’m not just talking about accidental pregnancies…which isn’t something I’ve had to worry about too much, incidentally…

For the benefit of those who actually like to read this blog, I’ll be getting back to posting at a more regular rate once I have more time on my hands, so this is just to let you know that I still feel like doing something with my blog, including editing it, because it’s format is terrible…

Life is uncompromising – that’s something that’s been proved to me for a long time, but never mind that now. If anything gets better, then I might post a joyful post for once about how great life is. But in the meantime, I want to briefly talk about story structure.

Yeah, because I’m still a writer, and in the process of writing a first draft of my novel.

*Cue canned applause*

Mm, yeah. And whilst the process of writing can sometimes feel like running your supple cheek against a diamond-edged cheese grater, I do really enjoy coming up with these characters and putting them in situations.

I just sometimes wish story structure would accommodate them.

If you’re going to write something, it’s vitally important you work out how your story pans out. You get your traditional narrative structure, with an introduction, exposition, conflict, rising action, climax and denounement (fuck spelling), but other than that it’s quite open to a lot of leeway. After all, your story could be unconventional, and even when it isn’t, like most of mine are because I’m not clever enough to write something purely symbolic (AND THEN I WOULDN’T HAVE CHARACTERS ūüė• ), and even if I knew the concept of structure back in the days of writing That Life, I’m still not the best at it…

One of the main reasons for this I think is that my writing’s always been very character-driven. I mean, if we go back to That Life, it was almost nothing but the characters, because the plot was completely nonsensical. And whilst I enjoy creating complex characters that steer the plot, and I’m not ashamed to admit that I think that it’s one of my strengths (I’ve vastly improved since I was 13), it does mean structure’s less easy. Why? Well, because¬†most of the time¬†the plot comes to me in incomplete chunks, like a¬†DIY coffee table that you got from cheap suppliers who only sent you half of it. That analogy didn’t work quite as well as I thought, I’ll have to work on that.

I’ve got these scenes in mind, including pivotal moments for certain characters and sometimes a climax, and because I’m so desperate to include these scenes, I have to make these scenes fit together somehow. Sometimes that’s fairly easy, but other times it feels far-fetched, I have scenes that drag on for too long, and I end up¬†with a rather forced climax.¬†There’s a joke to be made there…

So, how do you avoid this? Well, actually I have no idea, but maybe I’ll learn more as I¬†go through this writing process. One thing I will say for character-driven plots is that, if you’ve created quite a¬†lot of characters for this particular story, which, again, I tend to do, make sure you know which ones are going to be vital for the climax. The protagonist, the antagonist and their nearest and dearest, right?¬†Well, maybe, but it really depends. For example, if you have several character arcs running through a narrative, you’re going to want them all to culminate somehow, and in some cases, a decent climax (that is, the high point of the action in the story) for that to happen. But the climax you’ve got in mind might not be entirely relevant to other characters, or else having characters unrelated to it would be superfluous or¬†unrealistic to have them there. Their own character arc may have another resolution, which may be related to this climax, but not directly involved, and furthermore, different scenes could resolve different parts of a character.

In the current book I’m writing, for example, the more I’ve thought about it, the less likely it seems that the deuteragonist (second-most important¬†character) will be directly involved in what can be considered the climax. She is indirectly involved, and her own¬†personal character arc will come to a conclusion with the protagonist right at the end. The reason for this seems to be my reliance on structuring the story so that the most dramatic and action-packed character arc takes place near the end, including an antagonist that isn’t the direct instigator of conflict in the plot, just a catalyst. This kind of antagonist¬†will also appear in the next book I have planned after this. Yes, I can plan ahead. What of it?

So, in conclusion, structuring a story and getting people in the right place is very important, so make sure you know what you’re doing or else your poor characters will go unresolved. Looking at you, cast of That Life.

So, um, thanks for reading, give me your thoughts and I may post again at some point…

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